
Where Ladybugs Go to Die
Published: July 25, 2025
Pages: 312
ISBN: 9798899659232
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3 ratings
Nicole K.
Where Ladybugs Go to Die – 3/5 Stars
The premise here is genuinely original. A killer using nursery rhymes, ladybug carvings as calling cards, a grieving daughter thrust into the middle of it – there's a lot to love in the concept, and Kirsten clearly has a creative mind. The story kept me reading, and that counts for something.
Where it stumbles is in execution. There are pacing issues that pulled me out of the story – scenes that escalate out of nowhere without enough build-up to earn the tension (a sudden storm at a wedding that goes from zero to chaos in a matter of lines, for example). A few scenes also had characters appear or dialogue shift in ways that left me re-reading to figure out who was talking and whether they'd been there all along.
The editing needs another pass. It's not a deal breaker if you love the genre and can overlook rough spots, but readers who need polished prose will struggle.
I'm genuinely rooting for this author – the bones of a great thriller are here. With a developmental edit and a thorough line edit, this could be a standout. As it stands, it's a 3-star read with 5-star potential.
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Gail C.